Young People in Governments.

AL 84680 - SECTION 3
TOEFL INDEPENDENT WRITING
QUESTION NO. 23


Government is always an organization which holds the biggest obligation towards a country, that is to administrate the nation. This important duty is not easy, therefore Government needs the suitable people in positions to run the system of administration. In my opinion, I strongly agree that it is a good idea for young people to take on important positions in Government as the state of health of young people are better to lead Government’s duty and the level of curiosity and creativity of young people help to increase the productivity of Government.

In the aspect of state of health, young people are obviously better than the old people. This shows that they can actually perform better in carrying out duties because when they are healthy, there will be no such health problems that may distract or procrastinate them from completing the duties given. On the other hand, the high level of maturity of older people is a strong reason why they should be placed in the important positions in Government. They have more experience and skills, thus made them more mature and can guide the younger people on how to make things in a right way or getting tasks easier to be done.

The level of curiosity and creativity of young people help to increase the productivity of Government. They usually try to find some new and good ways to carry out tasks. When there are more ways to run the duties, productivity can be increased in a short time. The outcomes also will be more efficient and effective. In the context of Government duties, young people can do more tasks and duties to smoothe the system in administration. However, young people always caught in social problems and tend to rush in making decisions, thus they are not suitable enough to carry out duties in Government as the decisions they made can affect the outcomes and productivity of Government.

In a nutshell, I am inclined to believe that it is a good idea for young people to take important positions in Government as young people are healthier than the old people and the level of curiosity and creativity of them lead to an increment of productivity of Government. Therefore, Government should hire more young people to carry out the obligation to administrate the country so that innovative, productive and ambitious future leaders can be produced.